Angol fogalmazást kell írnom. Már kész van. Megnézné valaki, hogy jó-e nyelvtanilag és helyesírásilag? Fontos!

It was a nice spring afternoons. Tina was relaxing in her back garden when she heard that a dog started barking. Tina was very surprised and she watched to see that what is it.

The neighbor’s dog was standing before she and it was holding a mobile phone in its mouth. The dog brought the phone to Tina. Then it went back behind bushes and Tina decided that follow the dog. Tina was crawling to behind bushes, when she saw six little dogs. The puppies was very small and bald. She regreted for them and carried to her house and gave milk and dog food to them.

They was growing and evolving. When they large enough, Tina give to her friends, colleagues and other people.