Levelet kellett írnom angolul. Megnéznétek, hogy jó e? (lent)

angol B1-es (alapfok) nyelvvizsgára gyakorlok.

Arról kellett írnom röviden, hogy van egy kislány aki nem érzi jól magát, mert kicsit kövérebb a barátnőinél illetve a többieknél és neki nincs pasija, illetve mikor fogyni akar nincs kitartása.

Szempontok: - only the slim girls have boyfriends?

-deciding what is more important

-being able to keep to decision

- changing lifestyle - how?

kb 130-160 szó kell.

Kihagyom most a címzetet és a formáját a levélnek, a szöveg a lényeg.

Dear Susie,

Have you thought about you can be slim? Let me add one more thing, you needn't to be slim for all boys.

Not only slim girls have boyfriends. You can be beauty if you are not so slim. You have to choose. What is the importent, the healthy life or the cakes and cookies? If you don't eat healthy food you going to be sick. If you want to be slim, you have to go run three times a week and eat more fruites and vegetables without sugar. Why don't you ask your frineds? As for I'm concerned they will help you. If you are make it together it will be easyer. And now I'm making you a healthy diet. I will send it when I finish it. If you would like to be slim and healthy you should do what i'm writing to you now and I swear you will be happy.

Best wishes.

Krisztián