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Hi...!

You won't belive what happend to im in Siófok last Summer. I stayed 6 days there with my family.

On teh first day we went bathing and swimming. The water was very good. I swam a lot, but when I was coming out of the water I felt terrible pain. On the shore I noticed that my feet was bleeding.

It is likely that a shell cut my leg. I went to hospital and a doctor provided with my injury. On the next day I couldn't swim but I sunbathed a lot and relaxed. In the afternoons I visited sights and made lot of photos. If you want it I can point you them.

And you? Where did you gon on holiday? What happend with you?

Write back soon,

J.