Ez lent így helyes angolul (és jól hangzik)?

I'm thankful...for a beautiful experience, for all of the blessings and joys along my way, for the chance to become a better person, for the chance to give and experience love, for the kindness of strangers and for not being where i used to be.

Mostly I'm grateful for the beautiful people I met, for the new friends I have now from all over the world.

I know that everything comes when the timing is perfect but today I feel I'm a step closer to what I should and will become.