Angol érettségi levélírás?

Ezt a két levelet jól írtam így?

2009. október érettségi

A feladat:

This is an exhibition of models of creatures that lived 65 million

years ago: a life-sized woolly mammoth, a cat-like animal called

smilodon, the bear-like megatherium, the llama-like

macrauchenia and a 150 kg bird known as a phorusrhacos.

The exhibition also contains objects from the museum's

collection, including the bones of a 10,000-year-old mammoth.

A barátom, Brian erre meghívott.

A levélnek 50-80 szavasnak kellett lennie.

Kritériumok:

say why you are interested,

ask about the length of the programme and entrance fees,

ask when and where to meet.

Levelem:

Hi Brian,

Thank you very much for your invitation, I'd love to attend.

I'm looking forward to it, because I admire ancient animals since my childhood.

I would be grateful if you could inform me about the price and the time of the event.

What do you think, where and when should we meet before the programme?

Best wishes,

Ádi Nagy

B feladat

Ezt a levelet küldte nekem Jane, a levelezőtársam:

I have a problem at school. My teachers keep on

bugging me for using my mobile in the breaks

between lessons. I don't understand why! I always

switch off during lessons and I NEVER even TALK,

just text my friends. They have told my parents

about it and said that I seem to be really addicted.

Now my mum insists that I should leave my mobile

in my locker for the day and not touch it until after

school. I’m desperate! What do you think I should

do?

100-120 szavasnak kellene lennie.

Kritériumok:

why you think the use of mobile phones should or shouldn’t be allowed at school;

whether you think Jane is really addicted to mobile phones;

what you would do if you were Jane.

A levelem:

Dear Jane,

I am writing to you because I have read your letter and I would like to give you some advice.

In my opinion mobile phones are needed at schools if they can be used for the purpose of learning and tutoring. If they are for entertaining then they're unneccessary.

I think you're not someone who can be easily become a phone-addict. Your teachers may just be angry with you because you did something inappropriate and they spot even the smallest mistakes.

If I were you I would stop using my device and put it away at school for some days.

I hope I could help you.

Best wishes,

Ádi Nagy