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i love your touch / i love when you're touching me

I can feel your scent/smell

I love it when you look at me,

and your eyes shine

I love it when you laugh at me/ I love it when you are laughing at me

And your smile comforts me / And your smile's cosiness caresses me

I miss you when you aren't with me

I miss you when I'm alone

I miss you when you aren't embracing me

You make me crazy with a touch

You make me crazy with a glance

You take me to heaven with a dance

I suffer when I can't see you

I'm dying when you're mad at me / being angry at me

Always be here for me please

I miss you so much My Love