Angolból fogalmazást kell írni a házunkról, szerintetek eddig van benne valami hiba?

Our house is big and old. In our house there are six rooms: three bedrooms,one kitchen,a bathroom and a livingroom. The kitchen is small,but there are a lot of cupboards. there are some glasses and plate in the cupboards. there is a cooker,an sink,oven and a mixer. There is a garden. I like football in garden. There is a my dog.