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I'm writing to tell you about MY ILLNESS.

ON Sunday my family AND I went to THE HimalayaS. The weather was very cold THERE and the sky was cloudy. I FELL ILL WITH flu.

ON Monday WHEN I woke up, I had a very BAD headache and I had a fever. My mother made SOME very hot tea and toast. All day I WAS BLOWING MY nose and I stayed in bed. It was very bad, because I couldn`t play with my sister and I couldn`t go to school. IN THE evening I had fever again and I coughed. My moTher SAID that THE NEXT DAY WE WOULD go TO SEE THE doctor. The next day the doctor examined ME and he gave ME SOME medicine. I feel bettR now, but my throat is a little sore.

And how are you? Write back soon.