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Dear Patrícia, I would like to invite you as my best friend and cousin to my 18th birthday celebration, which will take place on Saturday, May 4, 2024, in our family home.

The celebration will begin at 1:00 p.m., which will be followed by the cutting of our favorite banana strawberry flavored cake with stracatela coating mass and the opening of the champagne piper Heidiseck rose champagne. There will also be smaller cream pastries, tea cakes, snowballs, coke cubes, Eszterházy cake, fanta slices, muffins and there will also be salty snacks. throughout the party, Ákos music will also be played from our own CD, but you can change it as you wish. Alcohol consumption is allowed in moderation, we will take care of the trip home. Your best friend Viktória

Dear Patrícia, I would like to invite you as my best friend and cousin to my 18th birthday celebration, which will take place on Saturday, May 4, 2024, in our family home.

The celebration will begin at 1:00 p.m., which will be followed by the cutting of our favorite banana strawberry flavored cake with stracatela coating mass and the opening of the champagne piper Heidiseck rose champagne. There will also be smaller cream pastries, tea cakes, snowballs, coke cubes, Eszterházy cake, fanta slices, muffins and there will also be salty snacks. The celebration will end with a garden cinema and a tent, on which a film will be shown from the CD by Ákos "Magunk maradtunk". During the whole party, Ákos' music will also be played from his own CD, but it can be changed as desired. Alcohol consumption is allowed, we will ensure the trip home what. Your best friend is Victoria