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Water Pollution

Water pollution is a major global problem and it is the leading worldwide cause of deaths and diseases.

More than 14000 people die daily because of the water pollution. Nearly 500 million people haven't access to safe drinking water in China and

only 46 percent of people in Africa have safe drinking water. More than 1 billion people haven't got drinking water.

Million litres of chemicals get to the oceans and rivers from the agriculture, oil rigs and our homes. A lot of rubbish gets to the seas from the dirty

beaches. This polluted water is dangerous for the animals, plants and peoples.

These things are preventable. Factories have to recycle the water and stop pouring chemicals to the nature. They also should repair leaking pipes to.

But what we can do?

We should use fewer water, collect rubbish selectivity and we shouldn't drop litter in the nature.