Valaki légyszíves átnézné nekem azt a fogalmazást ( going on holiday)?

Nem vagyok túl jó angolból,szóval..légyszíves leírjátok a nagyobb hibáimat?

Everybody is different. Some people love the hot weather, the beaches, islands and the exotic places. But some peole love the mountains and the trips.

I hate the trips and the big walks. I love the water and the warm weather. We usually go abroad on holidays. For example we were in Kefalonia last summer. It's a greek island. We travelled by py plane. I think traveling by plane is perfect, because i's fast and comfortable, bu someimes I'm scared. When we arrived we rent a car. We never go with tourist guide, we alway go alone. We alway go into apartments. I love the apartments because you can cook for yourself and you are free. Usually we see the seesights and and we always go swimming to the beach. when we were in Kefalonia the weather was great. It was warm and sunny.