A lenti szövegben milyen hibák vannak? Valamint megfelel annak a követelménynek, hogy hétköznapi szóhasználat van benne?

Angolra kellett írni egy levelet, ha látsz hibát benne, kérlek írd meg!:)

Dear Judit,

Thank you so much for the bracelet. It's look very nice. I wear it every day. I take care, because I don't want to lose it. You choose very well, the colour couldn't be better. I wear it all of my clothes because the bracelet really goes with everything. And it also goes with my Ice watch and the other bracelets.

I really enjoyed my birthday. My friends gave me a parfume, and i was glad because the smell of the parfume is very sweetie and good. My grandparents gave me some money and I gave more presents , like clothes and books. My cake was a fine ice cream cake. I'm sorry that you didn't taste it.

I hope you're well. Thanks again for the beautiful bracelet.

Love,

Karina