Angol szemelyleiras (? )
Cim: A person I've recently met
Karina is a new girl at university. She started only one week ago,but she already seems to have many friends.
She's small,slim and she very pretty girl in my class. Of course,she very popular,especially with the boys. She has got long,curly blonde hair,and blue eyes. She usually wears shirts and skirts,and she always pretty.
Karina is lazy girl,but she very clever. She always gets good marks for her assignments. I think she is very bossy. When we worked our's assignments,she always telling me what to do. I hate this kind of people. They're very annoying. But she has a good sense of homour.
I hope Karina and I are going to become friends because I like her. With her I feel so happy,and when we work together we don't have a bad marks yet.
Mit javitanatok rajta?
válasza:Szia :)
Van néhány hiba:
1) melléknévhalmozásnál van egy sztenderd sorrend:
Quality (slim, dirty...) Age Size(vagy shape) Color(vagy pattern) Nation
Szóval: "she's slim, small..." "curly, long, blonde hair"
2) "She usually wears shirts and skirts,and she IS always pretty"
3) "Karina is A lazy girl, but VERY clever" (ha a 2 tagmondat alanya ugyanaz, nem tesszük ki, ebben az esetben)
4)"she WAS always telling me"
5)"she has good sense of hUmour" (nincs névelő a good előtt)
6) "I hope (vessző), Karina and ME are ..." (=>because előtt van vessző)
7) "we don't have bad..." (nincs névelő, főleg ha a marks többesszám, akkor pláne nincs egyes számú névelő)
:)
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