Angol órára kellene a studentjob előnyeit és hátrányait leírnom, olyan mondatkezdésekkel, hogy First of all, On the other hand, In addition stb. Elég rossz vagyok angolból. Tudnátok nekem írni mondatokat?

Ez az, én sem tudom.

Student job has advantages and disadvantages as well. Firstly, student can make money by working, which supports their family. Secondly, by working, students will have many life experiences. In addition, it can affect the process of study. On the other hand, if student overworked, it will affect their health. However the student should have a reasonable plan in order to balance between the work and the study. Finally, I think the student job is good, because of many benefits it brings.