Szerintetek helyesek ezek a mondatok?

Sziasztok! Házinak kaptunk pár mondatfordítást és van egy pár amiben nem vagyok biztos, ha van benne hiba (valószínűleg) segítenétek kijavítani? Előre is köszi, ezek a mondatok:

A long time ago we were living here. And why did you move?

She always spoke about computers.

He had a car, but then he sold it.

I had ever loved him. Why did your feelings change? I don't know. We had been already together for five years, when I realized, that I don't love him. Before we broke up, I had gave back the ring.

She had ever wrote children's book. Did you love her books in your childhood?

She had been thinking about that she quits for a while, then she did it.

This time yesterday we were laughing on the party pictures.

Way to work, it started to rain. Sure enough I had left my umbrella at home.

It was going to be a one-day meeting, but it lasted for only a few hours.

That day he was very friendly to everyone.