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I'm trying to live a healthy life. I eat healthy food which means a little fat and sugar, a lots of fruits and vegetables for example apple, banana or grapes.

I rarely eat fast food, drink cola or alcohol. I eat several times a day. I like daily products like milk or cottage cheese. I don't do sports reguraly, but (ez itt az akar lenni, hogy "ha jó az idő"?) if the weather is good I ride the bicycle. I don't smoke.

Néhol csak azért változtattam, hogy változatosabb legyen a szöveg, ne legyen olyan unalmas. :)

Bármi kérdésed van még, írj!

I pursue to live a wholesome life. Consequently, I eat healthy food low in fat or sugar, and also a variety of fruits and vegetables, for example apples, bananas and grapes.

I just occasionally eat fast food, drink Coca-Cola or alcoholic beverages. I have several meals a day. And I go for dairy products such as milk or cottage cheese. I don't play sports regularly. But if and when it's fine I do ride my bicycle. I don't smoke.