Helyes ez a pár sor alapfokú angol fogalmazás?

Last summer I went to California with my family. It was great! We swam a lot on the beach, although we also went for a trip to Hollywood, Las Vegas, Beverly Hills and Warner Brothers studios. I saw much monument. (ez mi? Sok szobrot lattal?) We went by car, I have enjoyed it. We stayed there for a month, in a motel. In the mornings I went for a run on the beach. I bought T-shirts for my buddies. The weather was sunny and hot in Vegas, but some days were overcast. It was an enjoyable holiday.