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My name is __ __. I am 17 years old. I was born in Szombathely, in 1996. I live in ____ in the west of Hungary, in Vas county, with my parents, my brothers and my sister. My address is ______. I live in a house. I like it here because it is close to nature. My phone number is 0630-9911-19, and my e-mail address is _____. I am studying at a secondary school, which is called X Y. I like coming here, because my friends are here. My favourite subject is geography. I don't like Maths. I like playing basketball. I often play with my dogs. I love them. When I graduate, I would like to go to university, but I don't know what I want to be when I grow up. I like reading book and I love going out with my friends. I come from a small family. My mother’s name is Piroska and she is 54 years old, she is factory worker. My father’s name is László and he is 45 years old, he is contractor. My brothers’s name is József and András, my sister’s name is Piroska. They 32, 26 and 24 years old. My grandparents are no longer alive. My friends are my classmates and I have friends from my childhood. She’s name is ___. She is very nice and understanding. We talk and watch movies we used to when we are together. We meet every day. I have long brown hair and big brown eyes. I am 163 cm tall and 61 kg. I'm not thin. I wear simple, colorful clothes, my favorite color is blue. My friends think of me, I'm friendly, kind, helpful, understanding and funny. But I'm also sensitive, curious and a bit lazy too.