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In the christmas evning I was home with my family.At 19:00 o 'clock I went to the church with my moom and dad.After church we went to the home.In the home we weren eating a christmas dinner: cabbage soup, fish with potatoes, and cakes.After dinner we give the presens.Later we wisited my grandparends.At 22í.00 o'clock we went to the home. Iwas very tired ,Iwas going to the bed,and I was sleeping.