Mit írjak ebbe az angol fogalmazásba?

Egyszerű. Írj minden hülyeségről és minél tagoltabban.

Hy Jenny, I am (itt fontos ne I'm-ozz mert így 1 szó de külön 2 szó) glad to read your letter right after i just moved in my new house.(ennyi elég is bevezetésnek)

At first I did not know any people at my new house or at my new school nor in the whole town. But my neightbour was a really big help for me to get used to this new situation. She is a very beautifull woman (no itt arról beszélek milyen jól néz ki, kutya nem kérdezte de 20-30szót elrizsázok) and I really think about hitting on her but it might be a wrong idea since i just got to know her a little bit. After she introduced me to her friends i was not so lonely anymore. My new school is very good. The teachers seems to be nice and I also made a few friends already, because i found people with similar hobbies like mine. But I am not sure this school was the best, since it is really hard and i must study a lot. (itt is beszélek arról amiről nem kérdeztek de nem gond)

Even thought I already made some friends and even got to live with a very nice neightbour i really miss you, Jenny. Write me back as soon as can.

Kihagytam a címeket meg a többit, így hírtelen elsőre ennyi telt tőlem :D nem kell semmi komolyra gondolni csak sima általános rizsát önts át angolba.