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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the post of Summer Camp Hosts which I have read your advertisement in the May issue of Summer Camps.

I am a French and German teacher in a primary school. There are student from 10 to 14 years olds, so I know how to deal with this children.

I feel I would be suitable for this position because I greatly enjoy going out and meet new people, and I am a sports woman too. I go to run every day to the sports ground.

I have experience of this kind of work. Last summer I was employed by Kaplan London Bushey, which is a summer camp. I very liked to work there, that is why I have thought I would like again.

The school finishes in middle of July, so I would be available for work in August.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any more information. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,