ANGOL! Ez a szöveg jó így?

Ez a feladat:

You are in England, taking an English course in a school where there are students from all over the world. You receive the following e-mail from two South-American students:

Señores and Señoritas

Hold onto your sombreros!

We’re giving a surprise party to celebrate our

friend Juan’s 21st birthday!

Sunday, May 22nd at 6:00 p.m.

Please come!

Maria and Pedro

Write an e-mail of 50 words to Maria including the following:

Accept the invitation

Ask her exactly where the party will be

Ask her if you should bring any music

Ask her if you can bring a friend

Ezt írtam:

Hi Maria,

Thanks for the invitation. I'll be there on the party. Where will be exactly the party? I hope not far. I bring music? I bring with pleasure. I can bring a friend? It would be good. One more time thanks the invitation.

Nem vagyok valami jó ebben :/ Van benne hiba? Mivel lehetne még kiegészíteni?

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