Kijavítaná valaki az angol (rövid) fogalmazásomat?

The Russian people are very interesting and cold.

Many people believe in superstitions.

For example they're convinced it's unfortunate to see a black cat.

Johanna and her angry uncle came into Hungary four years ago.

She had her 20th birthday last year.

She got a black cat from her uncle.

While she was opening her gift, a cat hopped out of the box.

Johanna was very frightened and remembered "it's unfortunate to see a black cat"

The cat ran out of the house.

Johanna was searching for a cat when her uncle screamed.

She went back into the house but her uncle wasn't there.

Two minutes later she woke up.

'Oh it was just a nightmare'- she said and got up.

While she was brushing her teeth, she saw the box next to her chair and a cat hopped out of the box. :D

"the russian are..." nem kell, h people, ha van akkor nincs the "russian people are..."

"came TO hungary", nem into

A tobbi nagyjabol jo, doesn't really make a sense though:)

előzőnek:

make sense; névelő nem kell

Ja es nem kell idezojel itt: "unfortunately to see a black cat" , mondhatod igy is:

Johanna was very frightened and remembered that seing a black cat brings bad luck.

Az unfortunate nekem ide valahogy nem passzol egyebkent, a bad luck-ot hasznaljak.

itt is:

For example unfortunately to see a black cat. helyett:

For example seeing a black cat brings bad luck VAGY For example seeing a black cat is bad luck VAGY For example it is bad luck to see a black cat

Valassz:)