Ez a rövid szöveg mennyire helyes nyelvtanilag? (angol)

Hello everyone, I'm matt. This is Greg, and he loves eat ice cream and pizza. Greg usually plays with computer games, or plays with his dogs. The other sim names Mia. She is a student, and she is writing her homework now. She loves read book, and use to computer. They have got two dogs, and one guinea-pig. This dog names Boby, and he is a beagle. The other dog names Nessy, and she is a border collie. The guine-pig names Beast, but he is Sleeping now. They live in a small house. Greg usually sleep with Nessy,but she has a separate doghouse. Greg and Nessy are going to walk.

Kérem csak azok válaszoljanak akik tudnak is angolul. Ezt a szöveget angol anyanyelvűeknek kell előadnom, és azt szeretném ha értenék is. Ha valami hiba van benne, vagy azt máshogy írnátok, akkor szóljatok! Előre is köszi a válaszokat! :D