Jó angolosok! Elolvasnátok a levelemet (e-mail) és leírnátok ha valami hibás?

Dear Mr. Spencer,

I read your advertisement on the internet and I'm writing to ask for more information.

My name is xy, I'm a student from Hungary. I'm spending a year in Cheshire to improve my English. I like music, though I've never played any instruments. I can sing pretty well, but I should learn how to use my voice right. The instrument I'm most intrested in is the guitar.

I don't want to be professional, I would like to acquire only the base plate.

Would you inform me where and when these lessons take place? In the morning I have to go to school, so I'm able to visit the lessons only in the afternoon.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully, xy

(Elég sokáig nem foglalkoztam az angollal, csak a némettel, ezért még bele kell rázódnom. Előre is köszi a segítséget.)