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Dear Ms Campbel,

I am writing in regard to the intensive English courses you offer in the summer.

First of all, I would like to have a few words about myself. I am a 17-year-old girl from Hungary. I have been learning English for four years by now. I am planning to spend the summer holiday in Bristol and to best of my view an English course could better my knowledge a lot. My writing is fair enough but I would like to improve my speaking skills as well.

As I am a student I would be interested in the duration of the course, too. I have a two-months summer holiday. Do you have any courses for teenagers that offer a lot of speaking practice and takes about two months?

On the other hand, I don't have much money. Could you please inform me about the full price of your course? Besides, I am going to work in a shop. As it will be a part-time job, my working hours are from 8am to 12am every day including Saturday and Sunday.

At last but not least, I would be grateful if you could send me a brochure about the location of the course.

I should greatly appreciate an early reply.

Yours sincerely

Utolsó mondat:

I would appreciate your reply as soon as possible.