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Annyit megjegyeznek, ha meg van a szakember, akihez kuldod a levelet, akkor altalaban mar a neve is meg van, tudnod kellene.

Tehat Dear Mr... vagy Ms... a felszolitas, de en hagytam ahogy irtad.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you as I would like to ask for your professional advice.

Our company (name) has been selling quality ladies and gents T-shirts since 2004. The business has operated profitably in previous years but the financial year for 2012-2013 ended with a considerable financial loss.

One of the reasons for the company's financial loss may be that an increasing number of boutiques have opened in the neighbourhood, selling similar merchandise.

At the same time, customers seem to spend less money on clothing.

My questions would be:

* How could I solve the downturn of sales and how should I determine the pricing?

* Should I be offering discount prices for bulk purchases?

* Should I try to introduce new products?

* If I was to vary the choice of merchandise, in your opinion, what kind of new products should I launch?

* Do you see a way out to salvage the business?

* What other strategies are there besides closing the business down?

* Would you be able to provide me with some innovative ideas, options and resolutions to keep this company going?

I would be very grateful if you could provide me with useful information as soon as possible and to direct me as to what action I need to take.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if more information is needed regarding company's performance and management.

I am very much looking forward to your valuable suggestions at your earliest convenience.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely,

Johanna Smith