Ez a pár angol mondat így helyes?

( Ha nem helyes valami akkor a helyes verziót is megköszönném, ha leírnátok )

* Everyone is on this isle, becouse their ship had been sink, and they suffered a wreck,.Two night had passed, and this is the third day when its getting dark. Beren sits under a palm tree and tries to make a nest, becouse he wants to eat fish for the dinner.*

- I hate this... I cannot make it! Somebody want to try? Anybody pls

* He begs for his saviour.*