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Írtam egy angol fogalmazást, de nem biztos, hogy jó, mert nem vagyok egy nagy ész, és netes szótárakat is használtam. Kérlek kijavítanátok a hibáimat? Köszi.

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"The goose is an aquatic bird, although it doesn't fly, because it can't. In this regard he very resembles the ostrich, mainly it, that the goose neither buries its head in the sand, although it lays much smaller eggs. That is the goose.

Mostly hold to eat. So feeds it until a time, then eat its. But the goose isn't like it, so not eat often, just once. Not exception the goose that the fox, a dog or a wolf swoop, because its eat too, just not the people.

The geese have a special subspecies, what buys in plazas mainly, and with other geese to chirp. These geese aren't eaten, so they don't eat a lot, because the fat goose is rather chicken or pig, and then no donkey who would buy expensive things for they.

When a goose starts to gaggle someone think that it's not to echo. With this the only problem that the goose gaggle the same as the others, and we don't know that is the goose, or the response. And may be, that simultaneously two, or more goose gaggling. By this time really it is not possible to establish it, many people deny his existence simply because of this. That is the echo of the gaggle.

Thence not geese, because they gaggling, so they are – as a famous philosopher told it.

The geese very like the corn, pips and bread, but only when they can peck up. Some people don't know it, so they feed the geese. Because the goose eat, it can't say that he can pick up to oneself. Can't speak moreover, only to gaggle.

Someone thinks that the geese are stupids. It's not true. They wiser like snail, because the geese have feet, so they can run, but the snail is can't to do it. Then again the geese are stupider like dogs, because he does not have a tail, which he could wag if he is to happy to he is wiser like snail. BUT, the snail's have a house, while the goose just have a pen to pass into some fox yet. The fox won't do it with the snail's comfortable house.

So the goose not wise, and not stupid. Exceptions the silly geese, but they know this about themselves, and they do not take offence on this statement."


2008. nov. 14. 22:46
 1/3 A kérdező kommentje:

vagyis

These geese aren't eaten, so they don't eat a lot, because the fat goose is rather chicken or pig, and then no donkey who would buy expensive things for they.

helyett elvileg ez van:

These gooses aren't for eating, that's why they don't eat too much. A fat goose is rather a chicken or a pig and then there isn't a fool in the whole world that buy expensive stuff for it.

ezt már kijavították, de azért nem vagyok biztos benne.

2008. nov. 14. 22:59
 2/3 anonim ***** válasza:
100%

....But the goose doesn't like it, so doesn't eat often, just once.


...With this the only problem is that the goose gaggles the same like the others... And maybe simultaneously two, or more geese are gaggling.


... The geese like the corn, pips and bread very much, but only when they can pick up.


.. Some people think that the geese are stupid. ... They are wiser than the snail ... ... but the snail can't do it.


... The geese are stupider than dogs. ... which he could wag when he is happy to be wiser than the snail. But the snail has a house, while the goose just has plume (madártoll) to pass the fox.


.. So the goose aren't wise, and not stupid. Expect the silly geese...

2008. nov. 15. 02:37
Hasznos számodra ez a válasz?
 3/3 A kérdező kommentje:
köszönöm. :)
2008. nov. 15. 12:50

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