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Desperate Housewives PC game

This amazing lifestyle simulation game is based on the popular television series called Desperate Housewives. In the beginning you have to create a new housewife who moves to Wisteria Lane with her family. Then you discover your new home and meet your neighbours, and after that begins the real game. There are 12 episodes with lots of different tasks and interesting mini games such as gardening, playing Texas Hold’em or cooking for your family. You can control everything from your appearance to your relationships. But the most important thing to do is finding out the dirty secrets that your neighbours and also your family keep. Have fun!