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The most popular spectator sport in Hungary is football (soccer).

It is a team sport, two teams competing against each other. Each side contains 11 players. Ten players on the field and one goalkeeper, (goalie) who's position is at the goal nets. The goalie's role is to defend his own team's goal nets and the players' to kick goals into the opposition's goal nets.

The season for football matches is between March and October. This ball game is played on a grass field. There are two main notable championships. The European Soccer Championship is organised every four years. The next one will be in 2016. The eligible participating teams must be European. The World Cup is held in every fours too. One is coming up in 2014. The teams come from worldwide. The players' only tool is a football. The players of the two teams are distinguished by wearing their club's coloured jerseys. The referee is in black. He calls the two captains to the centre to toss a coin to decide which team in the first half will play in which direction. The aim of the game is to kick the ball into the opposition's goal nets.

The hard-die fans of football teams will follow their teams from one end to the other of the country as well as travel abroad.

There are four divisions within the football league; the best teams are in the first division.

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The hard-die fans of football will follow their teams...