Angolosok! Írok egy szöveget, valaki leírjá nekem, hogy helyes-e így, vagy nem? (ALAP SZÖVEG! )

Alapjában nem rossz, de akadnak kisebb javítanivalók.

Angolosabb, ha a "there is/there are" szerkezettel kezded a mondatot.

There is a desk on the right. (nekem a "side" feleslegesnek tűnik)

...and there is a chair opposite the desk.

The armchair and the carpet ARE between...

... two bedside tableS

?polcok vagy egy könyvespolc?

IN the middle of the room...

There is a convector in my room.

This is my room.

Looking inside from the door, on the right side of the room, we'll find a desk. My computer and a lamp are on top of this desk, opposite of a chair. A rug and an armchair are placed between a window and the desk. I have two bedside table lamps next to my bed. The left wall of the room contains a bookshelf. In the middle of the room, on the wooden parquetry floor, lies a large rug. I also have a heater in my room to keep me warm.

This is my room.

My room

On the right side there is a desk.

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The computer and the lamp are on the desk, and there is opposite a chair.

The computer and the lamp are on the desk, and opposite there is a chair.

The armchair and the carpet between the window and the desk.

An armchair and a carpet are between the window and the desk.

There are two bedside table next to the bed.

There are two bedside tables next to the bed.

On the left side there are a shelves or a bookshelf.

On the left side there are a shelves.

The middle of the room there is a large carpet on the wooden mosaics.

In the middle of the room there is a large carpet on wooden tiles.

There is a convector heaters in my room.

There is a gas heater, too.

Wooden mosaic???? - parquetry,

Konvektor - heater, heating element

Mint szonyeg darab - rug