Angol leveliras helyesen oldottam meg a feladatot?

"where will these events hold in Hungary? "

- Where will these events be held in Hungary? - Mert ugye szenvedő szerkezet.

"I would also want to know the event hold for professional athletes or amateurs can take this challenge too? What kind of sport can we choose?"

- I would also LIKE to know IF the event IS HELD for...

"Is there..."

- Kérdőjel?

"I look forward to your early reply"

- Ilyen értelemben nem használjuk az early-t. Egyszerűen hagyd ki.

Bocsánat, az nem what hanem which/that/semmi.

Az interested elé még rakj egy létigét.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in order to inquire about your advertisement which appeared in an English Sports Magazine.

First, the advertisement states events will start all over Europe. Where will such events take place in Hungary?

Second, you are looking for young people who are ready to compete. Is there an age limit? I hope my father can join me.

I would also want to know whether the event is hold for professional athletes only or amateurs can take challenge too? What kind of sports can we choose?

Is there any opportunity to do martial arts because I am really interested in them.

Finally, could you give me more details about the food you offer? I am vegetarian, so I hope there are some food for those people who do not eat meat.

I look forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Jim Kovács