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Rövidke történet, a válaszokat köszönöm. :)

"Rin went running to the park. He likes running alone,listening to music and just brooding on the meanings of life.

It was early evening but he didn't want to go back to his dorm. He knew Nitori is waiting for him, but he didn't care. He can be such annoying sometimes. He decided to go to see Haru instead. He wanted to see him before he goes back. He sighed wearily and knocked on the door, waiting to be let in. When Haru opened the door..."