Angol nyelvű beadandó, hibák?

Sziasztok!

Beadandót kell írnom minta alapján, amit meg is írtam.

A téma egy fórumon való első bejegyzés.

Ezt írtam, kérlek, ha találtok benne hibát, légyszíves jelezzétek! Előre is köszönöm! :)

Hello there,

My name is Tamás and I just happened to join this forum. I’m intrested in the theme of the forum and decided to jump in and participate. A little about me: I’m a 18-year-old secondary school student, who lives in Budapest, Hungary. I love technology, cars and of course DTM too. I’ve got a little, white car, a Renault Clio, which I want to repair and develop in the next month or two. At first the bottom of the car will be painted, because it is a littbe bit rusty.

If you have a same car, in case you want to contact me, write a mail at tamas.nagy98@freemail.hu. Well that’s all about me in a nutshell.

Im looking forward to meeting some of you,

Tamás