Ez helyes mondat helyes?

As I could observe, I'll have to either state my own point of view now or tell a general opinion about the topic, won't I?

As I could observe - Nagyon fancyn hangzik, de nem túl angolosan, én ide inkább csak egy "So"-t írnék.

I'll have to either state my own point of view now - I'll either have to state my own point of view (now - elég fölösleges/értelmetlen) - ez sem hangzik túl angolosan, de falun elmegy.

or tell a general opinion about the topic - or talk about a general opinion about the topic - a tell ide nem illik, a talk about angolosabban hangzik.

Én így mondanám.