Valaki hajlandó lenne kijavítani ezt a angol szöveget?

I was only seven years old

When I felt this for the first time

The weird thing is

She simply - trek semmiképpen nem, mit akartál itt mondani? Írd le magyarul

She lived in my mind, I could feel it in my heart (mivel az első része jelen időben van, a másodiknak is abban kell lennie)

I came to realize that I fell in love

When I closed my eyes I could see her

Until now

That was another world

She lived in my mind, I could feel it in my heart

Maybe it doesn't matter

I am just/only a dreamer

I believe that was magic

Not a stupid trick