Mik a nyelvhelyességi és kifejezésbeli hibák a szövegben?

Well, the recipe is very simple. You only need for some frineds, sprits, food and the brand new hits. Of course it is essential to choose a shocking enough place where you can (have? ) fun with the other party faces. They can be ships, cinemas in out of use and other remote places. There are so many advantages of the new wave parties. Firstly, you don't have to worry about your furniture and equipment. Secondly, due to the unusual plac it provides a funny feeling and makes the party more exciting. In addition to it's only about your creativity. It is surprising but nowadays children prefer entertaining out of home. The most favourite party places for teens are the fast sood restaurants. Meanwhlie there are other favorurable places namely pubs or clubs. The young are fond of them. We have to mention the spas. The artice says the Gellert Spa, which is an extremely popular place for entertaining. It occured that police had to come because of the long party.

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