13 éves vagyok. Nem vagyok valami jó angolból, írtam egy dalt az érzéseimről. Ha valaki van olyan kedves és jó angolos légyszi javítsátok a hibákat. Tudnátok segíteni?

when my father left, I broke

There was nothing so like it used to

Ohhh dad say why you left

I don’t understand why it was not as good so far

My friends don't like me

therefore I cried all night

there is no nobody for me

therefore i just cry

I hope that tomorrow will be a better life

I hope that tomorrow will be a better life

I try to understand the adults

I try to achieve my goals

I try to catch the sun

If there is only an arm's length

when my father left, I broke

There was nothing so like it used to

Ohhh dad say why you left

I don’t understand why it was not as good so far

I hope that tomorrow will be a better life

I hope that tomorrow will be a better life

My friends don't like me

therefore I cried all night

there is no nobody for me

therefore i just cry

I try to understand the adults

I try to achieve my goals

I try to catch the sun

If there is only an arm's length

I hope that tomorrow will be a better life

I hope that tomorrow will be a better life