Valaki leellenőrizné, hogy nyelvtanilag helyese és értelmese ez a szöveg? Ha nem, mi a hiba?

Dear Monica!

How are you? What about John? I’ve been here for five days, and I really like this city. New York is a beautiful and modern city. Now, I’m staying in a hotel, but on Friday I’m going at home.

I met with Kate 2 days ago. She’s changed. Her hair is very different. She broke her arm, because she fell when went swimming two weeks ago, but she’s fine. I’ve already been in the Central Park, and I’ve seen the Statue of Liberty, but I haven’t been in the Times Sqare yet. It’s the first time that I’ve been in the Empire State Building. Today I’ve eaten a real New York Burger. It was very delicious, but I think, it is very unhealthy. I’ve visited lots of museums. I was in several restaurant on Monday. I’ve been sad when I knew, that Emile Griffith, my favorite boxer, died. He boxed with Don Fullmer, Luis Rodriguez, Rubin Carter and Dick Tiger, you know. It was a very terrible news for me, but the life goes on.

Have you ever been to New York? Has Susie been at home yet? I’ll arrive to home on Saturday. I haven’t seen my family since April. I miss everybody.

XXX

Matt