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Hobbies and Relaxation

in my opinion, everybody needs a hobby, to pass the time, for example playing football, stamp collecting or whatever the person is interested in.

I believe I don't have enough free time because of school commitments.

If I did happen to have some time to myself, then I play games on my computer or watch a movie with my girlfriend.

Usually, I kick a ball around with my friends or run into the town.

(Itt nem tiszta, befutsz a varosba vagy korbefutod?)

Due to technological developments worldwide, more and more people started to find hobbies, interests in technology. Therefore, I believe, this may be just one of the causes as to why they are sitting front of their devices instead of studying.

Nagyon szedett-vedett fogalmazas, szerintem. Megcafolod sajat magad. Azt irod, hogy hobbinak kellene hogy legyen az embereknek, utana meg leirod,hogy a suli vegett nincs idod ra, de vegul is a szabadidodben a geped elott ulsz.)