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Education is one of the most important parts of a man’s life. Why, you might ask? Because proper education teaches not only how to think, how to learn, but it gives many opportunities to children. In other words: it determines a man's life from childhood. Researchers say the expected lifespan and the life quality also depend on the education. I do not have the proper words to express how important education is.

Education has two significant forms: education at home or education at school. Both have advantages and disadvantages as well.

Education at school is the traditional way of teaching. In this way children are all together in a classroom. It is very good because it can improve their socialization skills, on the other hand it is very bad because the teacher must share his/her concentration between many pupils, also it is not efficient enough. But this kind of education is free basically.

In contrast, education at home can be very expensive, but it is a more efficient way to educate children than in the traditional way. On the other hand, the child is at home alone, so the parents must find a way to provide the necessary socialization for their child. This is needed because kids need company, especially from their age group.

In my opinion, both forms of education can be very good. If I had a child, I would certainly choose home education because I believe, it is the most efficient way to educate children.

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Education at school - teaching in schools...

In this way - through this method...

Tul sok az education.

Irj szinonimakat- gaining knowledge, personal growth, academic learning stb